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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-01-27 07:52 AM


Enigmatic

Enigmatic is your smile
In the daydreams of my wile
As you set there on my desk
My Randy does an arabesque.

I see your picture every day.
It says to me come fly away.
Leave the doldrums of your bend
Let us have a better end.

Let us seek out valleys green
The garden of a lovely scene
And there we’ll sit in phantom play
And wile away a phantoms day.

Oh my dear this is my wish
And could it happen in a swish
I could not wish a better dare
This recipient and heir

So if you could in loving jest
Come and be my phantom guest.

© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2003-01-27 07:55 AM


...Phantom guests are perfect for fulfilling all those fantasies, aren't they?...

Duncan
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2 posted 2003-01-27 08:20 AM


Oh my dear this is my wish
And could it happen in a swish
I could not wish a better dare
This recipient and heir

So if you could in loving jest
Come and be my phantom guest.


Morning Sy, love this one.  It's reminding me of a song, the title I can't quite place.


Janet Marie
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3 posted 2003-01-27 08:55 AM


Who could resist your rhymes invite ...
flights of fancy by midnight's light.
A chance to dance at rainbow's bend ...
a rhyme scheme dream that never ends.

To ride a moonbeam and touch a star ...
to glide in the clouds, Heaven's door ajar.
To sail on sacred seas of serenity ...
pass through Eden's gates of divinity.

To walk hand in hand on sandy beaches of understand ...
we'll meet where it all began, here on the shores of Poetry Land.




so many times your winkie wiles make me smile


Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky.
We fell them down and turn them into paper that
we may record our emptiness.

K.G.

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4 posted 2003-01-27 08:57 AM


What a beautiful dreamlike quality this write has Sy.
Much enjoyed love.
~Morning hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-01-27 09:01 AM




(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, in fantasy we are always holding hands together in circles of peace and all making an arabesque of our own on the clouds! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-01-27 09:06 AM


yeah! I like it!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-01-27 09:24 AM


Nan
You are one of my fantasies ya know.

Duncan
The top of the morning to you and thank you.

JM,
My only regret is, that's all I can do.
WWRS

Enchantress
What no tea?

Noah,
Fantasy is half my life now. LOL

passing shadows
And I like you. Thanks

scorpio
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8 posted 2003-01-27 09:29 AM


A journey into whimsy, Sy...

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-01-27 09:37 AM


scorpio,
A journey on the steps of words, thank you.

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just out of reach
10 posted 2003-01-27 09:50 AM


Let us seek out valleys green
The garden of a lovely scene
And there we’ll sit in phantom play
And wile away a phantoms day

Seymour - you will never know how wonderful this sounds to me to-day. Thankyou for making me smile. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-01-27 10:15 AM


Chris,
A smile is the treasure of the wile.

Sunshine
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12 posted 2003-01-27 10:28 AM



Sy, "all you can do?"

Understated...
you do much more than
you might ever realize...

you, and that wink
in Randy's eyes...

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-01-27 10:44 AM


your "all you can do" ...
colors my world in hues of oceans blue!

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-01-27 10:48 AM


Sunshine


JM,
Randy enjoyed the game, but he's flying back to you.


garysgirl
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15 posted 2003-01-27 12:25 PM


Seymour, you are magical...      

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-01-27 01:16 PM


garysgirl
And you are the greatest!!!

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