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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2003-01-26 05:03 AM




Too scarred and broken,
My sword is too dull.
I’m simply too weak
To reach for my goal.

I fight pretty well
In the times that I try,
But for now I am broken
And wish I could cry.

The pains overflowing
My mind and heart.
My body is filled,
And it’s falling apart.

But tears will not come,
And I still try to fight.
I’m wanting to give up,
All I know that is right.

Hid it for too long,
And now it won’t come.

Set ready for the battle,
Still dry-eyed,
And numb.

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-01-26 05:06 AM


hey, you're not alone! Never give up!
zenny
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2 posted 2003-01-26 06:33 AM


As shadows says DO NOT give up
Often times tears can relieve a person, so don't hold them back, let the river flow

Many hugs, kelly

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

Kethry
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3 posted 2003-01-26 06:35 AM


and if you can't cry - write.
*HuGS
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Nan
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4 posted 2003-01-26 08:28 AM


This is a place we've all been, GG - Gratefully, there's light beyond the dark...
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-26 08:36 AM


GG
Enjoyed the write very much.

GG
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6 posted 2003-01-26 09:41 AM


Dixie,
Almost more saddening to know I'm not alone. Other people have to face it too! Thanks for the reply

Kelly,
you;re right, tears can relieve, thats why I want them so much!! ..but thanks much and still hanging on.

Kethry,
amennn! Writing is great! thanks much.

Nan,
good to know there's always light, isn't it?
I'm thinking its not even meyond the dark.. just eyes are closed in hopes of tears.. it dispells darkness y'know thank you!

Seymoure Sir,
Glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you muchly for responding.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-01-26 10:35 AM




Alyssa,

So heartfelt. ~Surrender~, the hardest lesson to learn, yet, the most important.

Hugs and love to you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

GG
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2003-01-26 11:27 AM


Pat,
Yes, it definitely is one of the hardest.. and so, so important. But, this too shall pass.... to bring along another battle.
Thank you, Love and hugs to you
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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