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Suetang
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0 posted 2003-01-25 04:17 PM





I am often left in awe
At the miracle of birth
Or when I see the first daffodil
As it breaks through the earth

I am entranced by the morning
In the early hours of dawn
When the birds come to my garden
I watch them feeding on the lawn

I am fascinated by the ocean
And the incoming tides
As the warm winds embrace me
I let the sun be my guide

I am seduced by the sunset
Where two lovers come to be
As they tenderly kiss each other
The sun sets below the sea

I am amazed by the moon
As it casts it's white light
In the quiet of the evening
Such a beautiful sight

I am captivated by your being
You are my lover and my friend
Within my heart you'll live eternally
My love for you has no end

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-01-25 04:23 PM


How beautiful to mix the love of nature with the love of another.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-25 04:49 PM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I love daffodils so much and the daffodil is actually a flower that deeply inspired me and touched my heart when I began to write so I'd lay in the daffodil field to gather nectar of lovely thoughts to write about! (kiss on cheek) may true love always whisper in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SimplyGold
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3 posted 2003-01-25 05:57 PM


Suetang,

Thank you for such a lovely poem. Yes, I too am in awe and admire your capitavation.

SG

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4 posted 2003-01-25 07:07 PM


nice
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5 posted 2003-01-25 08:27 PM


Sue - This was a true pleasure to read. Lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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6 posted 2003-01-25 09:55 PM


So beautiful, Sue. I love the poem and the picture. I've been trying to get some pictures with my poems, and Nancy's been helping me. I just can't seem to get it right, yet. Maybe I'll learn exactly what I'm doing wrong soon. It adds so much to the poem. Thank you...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Nan
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7 posted 2003-01-25 09:58 PM


Enjoyed - I like your style, Sue...
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-01-26 04:49 AM


you got it right!

beautiful piece, simple things in life sometimes we forget or take for granted...cherish every moment, yes

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9 posted 2003-01-26 05:06 AM


thank you for sharing your beautiful thoughts.......enjoyed it very much!

Charisma

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