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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-01-25 03:59 PM


“I CAN’T FORGET”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
One morning I gazed
at a rainbow kissing
the meadow,
and the sky lit
brightly with a plethora
of colors and then
I had thoughts
of you, the charm of
your face, the silk
touch of your hair,
and the tenderness of
lips soft that have
caressed mine so many
times I can’t forget....
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-25 04:04 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, you truly have a plethora of love and talent, sweet friend, the blood of a fine classic poet rests in you and circulates through your veins like wine, this is bound to make that lucky woman to swoon, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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2 posted 2003-01-25 04:19 PM


Bill,
you paint with the soft hue of emotion charged words - and I love it!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



regards2you
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3 posted 2003-01-25 05:08 PM




Very lovely, Bill. Enjoyed.


Pat

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        "Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-01-25 05:41 PM


Beautiful colors painted in the emotions of can't forget. Liked this one too. ThisDiamond
SimplyGold
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5 posted 2003-01-25 05:41 PM


Bill,

Once again you have succeeded in touching my heart. You are a man of recherche passion revealed so perspicuously in word.

I always get a lift when reading you.

S.G.

SmartChick
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6 posted 2003-01-25 05:42 PM


Very beautiful poem, Bill.

Poetic Bard
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7 posted 2003-01-25 05:47 PM


Wow, this is really good, loved reading.  Look forward to reading more of your work.

I bleed, you all read, and may the blood never stop spilling for loss of emotion would be all too damning.
~Joel

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8 posted 2003-01-25 07:05 PM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-01-25 08:05 PM


Blissful sigh here. Lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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10 posted 2003-01-25 08:08 PM


this is just beautiful, im not surprised you cant forget !!

"First remove the plank from your own eye so you can see better to remove the splinter from your brother's eye" - Jesus        

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11 posted 2003-01-25 08:23 PM


I've been doing a lot of sky watching myself, Bill...and you've painted a masterpiece...
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12 posted 2003-01-25 08:27 PM


Bill, this is so beautiful. I love it....
But, you knew I would, didn't you?  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

A Tone of Voice
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13 posted 2003-01-25 09:13 PM


this ~is~ lovely bill, very~!


~Atov

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14 posted 2003-01-25 09:15 PM


Beautiful Bill...perfectly beautiful!
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

inkedgoddess
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15 posted 2003-01-25 10:12 PM


i want to dream of colors and wake up as a rainbow
Eromyna
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16 posted 2003-01-25 11:17 PM


I like

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Martie
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17 posted 2003-01-25 11:33 PM


Bill--To weave the beauty of nature into your feelings of love...a perfect compliment.
Kellie_Cantrell
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18 posted 2003-01-26 02:08 AM


cute!!!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

passing shadows
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19 posted 2003-01-26 02:39 AM


unforgettable, some are, yes
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