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I won't push you down
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I won't push you down |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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It’s that feeling Making its way around again Right back to me Running away I’m not taking it for granted Hurt is blowing away in the wind Fear is throwing itself away This is today Tomorrow And the rest of your life I won’t push you down You won’t be badly treated You’ll only have to be yourself Running away I’m not taking it for granted You can stand your ground Your opinion won’t be banned This is your right to fight Let go But remember to hold on Because life doesn’t look after itself You can have today But don’t ever turn away From yesterday. small insignificant useless me |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very well said  Charisma |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
We learn from our experiences... indeed.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write, very wise, yes. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, this is a very wise write. I enjoyed reading it.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Balancing the opposites like monkeys on a teeter-totter -- nicely done. I especially like the way you use an irregular form to keep the reader off balance. ------------------------------ |
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