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A2J
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0 posted 2003-01-25 02:23 PM



..finally

my chains have been broken
i've been set free
this world is no more
nor is the old me
my wings are spread out
i'm ready for takeoff
i'm being myself
...finally

i used to be a sheep
blindly following society
i used to be a pretender
claiming i had a life
but now i am myself
no strings attached
i am me, i am free
...finally

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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-01-25 02:32 PM


All we really can be is ourselves. Which, sometimes is quite surpisingly unique!! Enjoyed your write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Charisma
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2 posted 2003-01-25 02:34 PM


always good to be yourself, enjoyed the read

Charisma

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3 posted 2003-01-25 02:39 PM


good feeling, isn't it?
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