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Open Poetry #24

My Dark Love

Ian Hughes
New Member

since 2003-01-08

Posts 7

0 posted 2003-01-25 01:47 PM

You sit there silent
Floating in space
Your scent fills the air
Directionless, all consuming
Your contours are smooth
Coloured like autum leaves
Your shape changes
You begin to sink
Im loosing you
Come back my poo

[This message has been edited by Ian Hughes (01-25-2003 01:48 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-01-25 01:57 PM

Ian Hughes
An errant lady fair or a dare? enjoyed

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-25 02:04 PM

missing is hard

Ian Hughes
New Member

since 2003-01-08

Posts 7

3 posted 2003-01-25 02:05 PM

Actually fecal in origin:

"Floating in space" - in the toilet bowl
"Your scent fills the air" - stinks toilet out
"Coloured like autum leaves" - brown
"You begin to sink,Im loosing you" - floats under u-bend

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2003-01-25 07:38 PM

cute

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