Open Poetry #24 |
For MY Shadow |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
For MY Shadow I tip toe on the edge of a shadow this bond ties the lacing of my shoes his whispers are soft as kisses his words sometimes become my muse "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
oh, i do like this. well spoken... it is nice to have such a relationship. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
'Tis good to be followed by a muse.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Interesting shadow, enjoyed. |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I like this. I just assigned my 6th graders to write a free verse about shadows.. I like it.~~ (¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
your usual..tight composition... this with a tender feel.. I enjoyed |
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