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DonFurr
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0 posted 2003-01-25 02:07 AM



If you
couldbut hear
my thoughts
You would never
doubt that
you are
loved

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


© Copyright 2003 Don Furr - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-25 02:31 AM


they say everything is energy, can you imagine the color of your thoughts.....I like this idea~! *S* ~enjoyed~!
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2 posted 2003-01-25 10:44 AM


Nice.... we can indeed talk about love with a masculine voice. Wish I'd written this one.
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3 posted 2003-01-25 10:56 AM


AAWWW..this is so sweet. My Love tells me that a lot. But, he knows how to tell it out loud, as well as show it.....
As I'm sure you can and do, too, with your Love......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-25-2003 10:57 AM).]

barbaraj
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4 posted 2003-01-25 10:57 AM


i enjoyed this poem very much. keep up the good work and it'll sell.
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-25 11:00 AM


DonFurr
Good write, enjoyed.

1slick_lady
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6 posted 2003-01-25 03:40 PM


don...this is beautiful...h
regards2you
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7 posted 2003-01-25 04:47 PM




This is precious!


Pat


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Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-01-25 10:13 PM


DonFurr - if one could hear the thoughts, it would be grand...

BC

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9 posted 2003-01-26 04:48 AM


it's a shame we can't hear other's thoughts
Rainbowdust
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10 posted 2003-01-27 08:20 PM


Wonderful Don; poets who express such depth with so few words truly have all my admiration. Thanks for sharing

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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