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Duncan
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0 posted 2003-01-25 12:21 PM




She trembled
beneath my hand
and on that…
I dreamt a lifetime.

© Copyright 2003 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Eromyna
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1 posted 2003-01-25 12:26 PM


Purtifull.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-25 12:46 PM




(smiles) Oh Duncan, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I long to have that feeling of holding my loves hand and feeling the soft tremble! (big hugggsssssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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with you
3 posted 2003-01-25 12:49 PM


Cowboy, you make *sighs* happen
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4 posted 2003-01-25 01:37 AM


I like this, Duncan.....made me think of Gary, but everything  makes me think of my Gary.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

A Tone of Voice
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5 posted 2003-01-25 02:38 AM


oh I love romance, those sweet moments when two people feel.....good on you~! S*
Sandpiper
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6 posted 2003-01-25 07:37 AM


...and I bet she did too!!!  ENJOYED!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-01-25 07:49 AM



I dare you...
do that again...

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-01-25 08:01 AM



Damn!...

regards2you
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9 posted 2003-01-25 08:09 AM




Amazing how such a few words can change one's heart rhythm and breathing.... Romantic and real.


Pat

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        "Desiderata"

1slick_lady
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10 posted 2003-01-25 08:11 AM


ohhhhhhhh myyyyyyyyyyyyy !!! h
abbe
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11 posted 2003-01-25 09:15 AM


short

perfect

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12 posted 2003-01-25 09:18 AM


Duncan
Now that I understand.

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2003-01-25 09:44 AM


Wham ... bam ... one, two ... knock out punch.


will ya look at that....
A heartbeat ... distilled.


(you rock)

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Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

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Gaia
14 posted 2003-01-25 11:37 AM



You're making me see rainbows again.

Severn
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15 posted 2003-01-25 07:39 PM


Lovely, D...

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just out of reach
16 posted 2003-01-25 08:30 PM


Oh my goodness!! I am so glad that I didn't bypass this one. Wonderful!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

ThisDiamond
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17 posted 2003-01-26 11:12 AM


Standing Ovation!
Brilliant. TD

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18 posted 2003-01-26 11:38 AM


Dreams can become reality.
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19 posted 2003-01-26 11:40 AM


enjoyed
Martie
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20 posted 2003-01-26 11:41 AM


Duncan--You do know the meaning of short and sweet!
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21 posted 2003-01-26 12:39 PM


whoa!
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Between the Lines
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