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0 posted 2003-01-24 11:07 PM


Like a little bird
with a broken wing
Wondering if ever
she'll again sing

Or if she can
once more fly
Wondering, asking
questions why

Then along comes
a special friend
Offering a hand
to her lend

Then she mended well
the little bird
With words of love
from another heard

So if together we,
you and I,
Will help our friend
again she'll fly


© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
neveah5
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1 posted 2003-01-24 11:12 PM


This is sweet Ethel. I'm sure she will enjoy this

BTW thanks for the birthday wish  

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2 posted 2003-01-24 11:23 PM


something wrong with our Dixie???

healing hugs!



a wonderful thoughtful gesture of friendship for our friend, ethel...

one for you too--



for being so sweet.

and psssst..congrats on yer 5,000th post!


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3 posted 2003-01-24 11:29 PM


This is so sweet. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2003-01-24 11:31 PM



Ethel~
Such a sweet and caring write this is.
I'm sure Dixie will appreciate it very much.
Hugs to both of you,
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2003-01-25 12:30 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Ethel, this is lovely, sweet friend, I know her wings will mend in tie and she will again fly ever more graceful than ever! (sad sigh) God Bless You Both, sweet Ethel and Dixie, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-01-25 12:34 PM


You've got a kind heart Ethel.  I'm sure Dixie will appreciate your words and sentiment.  Stay warm!
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7 posted 2003-01-25 10:06 AM


Heather, thanks for reading and replying. I appreciate it.
And, you're welcome for the birthday wish...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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8 posted 2003-01-25 10:09 AM


Thank you, Karen for the compliment....

I was so touched by Dixie's post I read about the "Broken Wings",
that I thought of a little bird. I hope she likes this. She's a
very sweet, compassionate person and i get mad about her
being treated like she is. Again, thank you, friend.......

~Ethel~

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9 posted 2003-01-25 10:11 AM


Julie, it's really good to see you back. I appreciate you
for
reading my poems and replying to them. Thank you, friend.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-01-25 10:13 AM


Thank you, Vicky, for reading and replying. You're really sweet
and I appreciate your kind replies.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-01-25 10:15 AM


Noah, thank you for your sweet comments. I really appreciate them.
You are a very caring person....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-01-25 10:17 AM


Duncan, thank you very much for the sweet reply. I appreciate
it. And, hope you stay warm, too.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-01-25 12:30 PM





Ethel,

Very sweet and thoughtful.

Hugs, Pat

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14 posted 2003-01-25 12:33 PM


Pat,
Thank you sweet lady. I appreciate you reading and replying to me....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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15 posted 2003-01-25 01:00 PM


Oh Ethel!

I sware, girl, what am I gonna do with you? This just touches me beyond anything I've felt in a very long time!

I'm so glad that I could inspire you to write such a piece, a beautiful piece of art like this, for me. I truly am blessed to have you and all of these wonderful caring loving people here at Passions!
Thank you for this. I'll keep this forever.

Thanks to all of you who replied, to this, and to Sue's poem for me too. I just don't know how to express how much you all mean to me.

Love to all, Dixie

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16 posted 2003-01-25 01:05 PM


Sharing your words with Dixie is one of the greatest gifts you could have given her. A very nice poem.
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17 posted 2003-01-25 01:17 PM


Deep caring is often difficult to express, (I'm a man, I ought to know) but you did it very well.  KenJ

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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18 posted 2003-01-25 01:19 PM


we all need a little help from our friends, every now and then.....wonderful the sentiment, thank you gg for sharing~!
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19 posted 2003-01-25 01:28 PM


Dixie,
We all care for you. After all, you're a very big part of this
great big family of friends here at PIP. You are a
very special person, dear friend.
       

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20 posted 2003-01-25 01:32 PM


D. Lester Young,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I know that Dixie does, too.  
.
.
Ken,
You expressed your care by reading and replying. I thank you.
.
.
ATOV,
Thank you for caring enough to read and reply.I appreciate it
and I know Dixie does, too.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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21 posted 2003-01-25 01:38 PM


enjoyed it very much....it is always good to be inspired by other poets here.

Charisma

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22 posted 2003-01-25 01:44 PM


Thank you, Charisma. I appreciate your reading
and replying to my poem.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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23 posted 2003-01-25 05:38 PM


Ethel, this is a beautiful poem for sweet Dixie.
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24 posted 2003-01-25 05:44 PM


Garysgirl, I don't think I know Dixie, however, I know she will appreicate this.

I did..
SG

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25 posted 2003-01-25 06:34 PM


Sue,
Thank you so much. I appreciate your reading
and replying.
.
.
SG,
I'm glad that you appreciated it. I appreciate your
reading and replying to me. Thank you.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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