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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-01-24 05:59 PM


It is 19 degrees
The owner of the house
Puts blankets outside
For the stray cats

She can't bear
To see the cats freeze

So that they freeze less
And out of the compassion of her heart
She puts blankets outside
For the cats
Every year around this time

Out of love
For the freezing cats

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2003-01-24 06:36 PM


You know, you paint such picture stories with your talent, my friend.  I really enjoy your style...it's free and unbound, and that is so refreshing!
Keep it up...we enjoy!!  ~~S~~

A truly happy person is one who
can enjoy the scenery on a detour!

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-01-24 09:16 PM



Loner, you are on a start
of creating a style of poetry
that fits you...

keep it up...

simple, direct, demanding.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-01-24 09:18 PM


sounds like someone i know
cute poem

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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Florida, USA
4 posted 2003-01-24 10:11 PM


Julie, I always feel sorry for the stray animals, too....
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-01-24 10:14 PM


People should remember their pets in this weather!
Very thought provoking write.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2003-01-24 10:14 PM


Cats have an amazing ability to survive...they would do just fine if all humans disappeared off the face of the earth...amazing creatures..

believe in what your heart feels...

paladin
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7 posted 2003-01-24 10:21 PM


I just reported a neighboor to the humane society.They have a dog chained to the side of their trailor with out a dog house.The people from the society took the dog.I thought what justice it would ne if they chained them out side their trailor for one of these below freezing nights.

paladin

....a knight without armor

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
8 posted 2003-01-24 10:36 PM


That's a cat lover for you.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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