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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-01-24 08:03 AM



Playing The Waiting Game

I have no way of knowing
Could I have lost a friend
Our bond of togetherness
Perhaps they want to end

Because of your silence
The lingering long pause
I play the waiting games
Left to ponder the cause

I need you more than ever
For I am  feeling so alone
Meanwhile I shall linger on
Through memories I roam

Wishing with all my heart
Can my despair be heard
Yearning through silence
For any comforting word

My mind always wanders
Pages and pages of we
Magical times of plentiful
All remain in my memory

If only it could be known
Why friends drifted apart
Will tomorrow find words
For writing heart to heart

HopeĀ©2003

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-01-24 05:17 PM


Beautiful words from a beautiful soul.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Charisma
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2 posted 2003-01-25 10:20 AM


words from the heart, you translated very well here.

Charisma

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3 posted 2003-01-25 11:49 AM


Hope, this is beautiful It needs more attention, I think.....


"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-01-25 11:55 AM


Thank you "the loner , for your kind hearted reply
Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-01-25 11:56 AM


I thank you Charisma for you kind hearted reply , so pleased you enjoyed
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-01-25 11:58 AM


Thank you Ethel , your kind reply and thoughts are much appreciated
Hope

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