Message To A Selfish Woman

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Open Poetry #24

Message To A Selfish Woman

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-01-24 02:04 AM

Message To A Selfish Woman

Somewhere in the passage of time
I seem to have lost the hope
that I could be yours
and you would be mine.

Now I find myself not
wanting to continue on
the same path as before.

My desires have already died
and I'm not sure if my dreams
are alive anymore.

JamesLee
January22
2003-

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-24 02:07 AM

sure they are alive! you just need some inspiration!

Salty
Senior Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 669
Texas

2 posted 2003-01-24 02:50 AM

sounds as though you might just need a change ...of dreams.

Nicely written JamesMichael

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-01-25 06:20 PM

Somewhere in the passage of time
I seem to have lost the hope
that I could be yours

I understand these feelings...

Don't opt out and sell yourself short,
keep your hope floating James and hold
onto your dreams.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-25 06:29 PM

James, I think this is one of your best. I enjoyed reading it...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

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