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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-23 10:08 PM

only
the elegant trees,
could offer such beauty,
as they sit gracefully
on their branches,

only
the open skies,
could relinquish
space enough,
for their
glorious free flight,

only
the bottomless ocean,
moved by the loving moon,
could be the inspiration
as their guiding light,
calling them home
from the darkness,

only
a warped boy
like you,
that awakened
a warped girl
like me,
from the deepest of sleep,
could echo
their presence
as they fly by,
in my most
sacred of spots

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-24-2003 09:06 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-01-23 10:36 PM

only
the bottomless ocean,
moved by the loving moon,
could be so inspirational
as a guiding light
to call them home
from the darkness,

Warped? I think not!

We've all got a soft spot~

*applause*

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2003-01-23 10:48 PM

Warped, I think not. Misguided maybe. Confused probably. The bottomless ocean doesnt exist, except maybe in your mind. Warp perfection is a terrific contradiction!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-01-25 12:58 PM

Michele, I like this......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-25 01:20 PM

Nicely done...and I, too, like the juxtaposition of "warped perfection". KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-01-25 02:03 PM

this is deep...I like it

A Tone of Voice
Member

since 2001-07-18

Posts 287

6 posted 2003-01-25 02:58 PM

I often feel as if I'm locked into my ultra own warped speed....hehe~! This is a cool write, and BTW I like your picture and the tattoo~!

~Atov

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-01-25 03:39 PM

(smiles) Running is overrated, everyone who dreans to be Prefontaine needs to pace it down and walk and see the beauty before it passes them by! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-01-25 04:01 PM

inkedgoddess - you romantic you...

BC

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

9 posted 2003-01-25 04:21 PM

I found this to be quite intriguing. Could you explain what you mean by "warped?"

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-01-25 04:31 PM

loved the warped perfection, very esoteric.

Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-01-25 10:02 PM

thanks, for tuning in
warped.......i guess for opeths sake,
inexplainable, kind of off the chart, i guess

ethel, you do the cutest graphics, i'm still working on figuring out the instructions you sent, thanks again

tone- thanks, nice of you to comment

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-25-2003 10:05 PM).]

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