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Amature2
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since 2001-01-08
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0 posted 2003-01-23 06:28 PM



Closed

I have a hope chest
Full of feelings
They tend to get me in trouble
When I let them out
So for now I will lock it up
The feeling in there
Can no longer get out
And in the process
No new ones will be coming in


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-01-23 06:48 PM


sounds kind of limited , unreceptive,
but got the point across

GG
Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
2 posted 2003-01-24 01:07 AM


made me sigh.
Somehow the pain always finds it way in,
And so do a few laughs and smiles.
Though blocking and closing doors seems best..
it hurts even more.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-01-24 04:06 AM


sounds like me....never thought of it that way, but yeah, it's me
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