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Open Poetry #24
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Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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0 posted 2003-01-23 03:09 PM



haunted melodies over
the crest of yesterday
jumbled thoughts turned
icicles in wintry winds
empty swing on an old oak
calling, "come play with me"
but the sun has set & the
children are gone

this is you and I,

this is you and I...
Sunkissed.
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neveah5
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since 2002-11-22
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1 posted 2003-01-23 03:10 PM

Paints a lovely picture

enjoyed
Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-01-24 07:09 AM


Now did you intentionally mean
for your name to be part of the poem,
as it is?

I hope so, because it works!
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