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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-01-23 10:09 AM



My Step in Time

I warm myself in the peace of you,
as another day finds me alone.
But I can phantom and touch the edge
of memories, enjoyment sown.

I border you in margin gilt,
a luster, always to light my days.
To balance each and every mood,
your chemistry dissolves the haze.

I place the love I feel in words
rearranged and framed just so,
softly finger the panes of you,
the cold of glass warmed by my know

that you are there "my step in time"
if only in my thoughts and rhyme.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-01-23 10:16 AM


Maureen,
Very nice, enjoyed the read.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-01-23 12:16 PM


Maureen, you must know my mind played with the sounds of the words and varied the spellings...

good piece here...
find peace there...

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-01-23 12:24 PM


Maureen, you "rearranged and framed" your thoughts into a poignant "step in time" in rhyme!

Very well done!
Warm hugs,
Linda


nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-01-23 03:51 PM


Sy, thanks for reading me

Karilea, I played with those same words myself *s

Linda, I don't know  if you do this but I have several poems of meaning framed and sitting around the house. And even  have them accompanied by crystal butterflies or cloissonne enameled ornaments that have meaning to the poems. So whenever I want to I can stop and read and remember when and why I wrote them.

hugs back
M

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-01-24 10:22 AM


What a lovely idea! No, I haven't but I just may start doing that myself! Thank you!
You have such a romantic and creative soul--that is why you are such a fine poet!

Warm hugs,
Linda

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-01-24 10:47 AM


thanks Linda...I just have a mind that doesn't quit. I am not so sure it's all that creative. *s
M

Kethry
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7 posted 2003-01-25 04:04 PM


It never ceases to amaze me how you frame sorrow and memory with beauty to give us a gift that is unfading.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-01-27 05:45 PM


Kethry, I thank you for such a warm response.
Knowing you as I do, I appreciate you more every day.
hugssss
M

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