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Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

0 posted 2003-01-22 03:00 PM

Crashing down into earth,
Splingtering to human form,
But yet,
You carry the heavenly grace and morality,
Forgetting about your own past,
Up in the heaves so high,
They said you where the One-winged Angel,
To cover the skies from the ground,
They said you were for,
And as,
A divine gift,
To be,
Your Guardian Angel,
The One-winged Angel,
That feel from sky to earth,
To be the pillar of hope for someone,
Somewhere,
To carry the light to banish the darkness,
For someone,
Somewhere,
I hope,
I think,
I see it's you,
Off in the distance holding it on your own,
So here I shall be,
As your Knight in shining white,
Someone to tell anything,
Someone to be your everything,
Someone to be,
Your Guardian Angel.

Anyway, enjoy.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-01-22 03:14 PM

completely sweet

the ending was great!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-22 03:29 PM

...Exquisite...

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Crimson Angel
New Member

since 2003-01-21

Posts 5

3 posted 2003-01-22 03:45 PM

You weave a vivid image.
~Beautiful~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-01-22 04:30 PM

a lovely surreal, ethereal write...
welcome to Poetry Land poet sir...
so nice to have you here with us!!

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

Poetic Bard
Member

since 2003-01-22

Posts 84
Canada, BC

5 posted 2003-01-22 05:05 PM

Thank you all for your comments, I'm glad my poetry, at least that one piece, carries some emotion with it. After the next one I post, I'll allow you all to read something a little, darker, for not all of the emotions I've felt have been as sweet as the ones that fuel many of my poetic pieces.

Beneath, there is more beneath, but, what is there in the end? More beneath? Or something more?

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-01-22 10:52 PM

(sigh) This is so beautiful, sweet friend, may you always be the obelisk of her heart and the priest which lets the light shine and bring comfort and faith to her world forever! (big hugggssssss) Your golden heart is deserving of true happiness forever, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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