Spartanburg, South Carolina
Loved it. This one is a trite, silly little peice, but it made me laugh out loud. My favorite lines were:
but i'm not.
The break there is really brilliant, because you leave the reader hanging for a moment, thinking that the *time* is morning, but the *speaker* is not morning. This is a really neat little device. That and the "pm Dig it" line were my favorites.
Not your usual style, but I enjoyed it.
I believe the most important component of a poem is rhythm. Rhythm is the heartbeat of a poem. It is what makes poetry poetry.