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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-01-22 02:08 AM


ShadowTrilogy II

Just a leaf
dangling off
a withered tree
the cold
familiar chill
of this wintered
life
leave me further
down the spiral


[This message has been edited by Aenimal (01-22-2003 02:29 AM).]

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-01-22 02:11 AM


this is deep...enjoyed the first part too
SEA
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with you
2 posted 2003-01-22 09:47 AM


wow, this is intensely sad....more hugs
Elan
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since 2002-05-03
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State of Wide Eye
3 posted 2003-01-22 09:51 AM



Several ways to read this,
whoosh right through,
or flutter along...

I did both...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2003-01-22 09:56 AM


Aenimal
It's a one way spiral, enjoyed.

Connel
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5 posted 2003-01-22 11:47 AM


Enjoyed every word. =)

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-01-22 09:09 PM


Thanks all see you soon take care
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2003-01-23 01:22 PM


Raph, I'm extending a wing to you! Grab on and we can fly above the dark clouds together!

Sending you lots of loving angel hugs.
EA

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