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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-01-21 09:28 PM



You have still have power

I, the keys

If only I could see
through this damned blur
which will lock away these
rebounding feelings I wish
dead, wish I never knew

you still have power
you neither wanted nor
asked for
& knowing, is salt upon
an unhealing wound
You still have the power
to hurt me & I hate myself
for giving it to you...

sunkissed.

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-21 09:36 PM




Glad to see you posting. Wow. You have the power to cause me to say I understand these feelings, although the one who had that kind of power over me, did hoodwink me, when I was vulnerable and did not know such charasmatic, charming, (evil) people existed....

Thanks for reminding of this feeling, that I no longer have....

Hugs and strength to you if you are writing about yourself.
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Sunkissed
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2 posted 2003-01-21 09:42 PM


Thanks Pat.  Old poem and old feelings, tis all...

*hugs back*

Sunkissed.

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3 posted 2003-01-21 11:30 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is so sad but true, sweet friend, once one has been granted aceess one can never truly leave and there is always that haunting freeze intruding again! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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