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0 posted 2003-01-21 03:57 PM



            ~~~~~
       torn and tattered
       yesterday's dreams
       drape themselves
       wearily over
       Hope's closet door
       desperately in need
       of the
       healing stitchery
       that can only
       be administered by
       Life's expert tailor -
             Faith
             ~~~~~          
                              

                                  Chris Barker
                                      2003
                                     ~~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-01-21 04:01 PM


" desperately in need
       of the
       healing stitchery
       that can only
       be administered by
       Life's expert tailor -
             Faith"


Yes!!  I know what you mean exactly little sister!
Keep the Faith!  All will be well...
~Love and hugs to ya! Teed~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-01-21 04:09 PM


Hi Teed!! Thanks....yes, I wish you were here...or I was there...or we could meet somewhere in the middle..oh, you know. love and miss ya!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-01-21 04:32 PM


You got to have Faith....it keeps you going. Short and sweet, this was a nice read.
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4 posted 2003-01-21 04:38 PM


bklyn boy - thankyou for your comments.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-01-21 08:00 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is so very true, sweet friend, this is so very true and may faith always be the tapestry of your soul and fill you with delight! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-21-2003 08:00 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-01-21 08:05 PM


Awww sweet Noah, you have such a way with words. Thankyou so much.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-01-21 10:04 PM


FAITH!!!  YES!
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8 posted 2003-01-21 10:17 PM


Without Faith, it's really difficult to get through life.

Wonderfully written Chris ...

Snuggle up and keep warm ... hugs, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

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9 posted 2003-01-21 10:18 PM


Man, that is really a good poem..
And im not lieimng..
I really did enjoy that poem..
Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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10 posted 2003-01-21 11:02 PM


Goidsparkless - Thankyou so much.

Marti - many thanks dear poetess

Connel - I am glad that you enjoyed.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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11 posted 2003-01-21 11:40 PM


Your title drew me in, and I am so glad I stopped by to read.  Faith is a wonderful fabric to weave, even when it's tattered it binds the threads that give us hope.

Loved the way you wrote this Chris~

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12 posted 2003-01-22 10:05 AM


Blues - thankyou so much. I loved your comment.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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13 posted 2003-01-22 11:22 PM


cute and clever analogy to make your lovely poetic point.. a quilt of faith and hope.
good to see you posting again poetess Chris-girlie

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14 posted 2003-01-22 11:45 PM


Faith?  Hope?

One and the same?

Both, beautiful...

just like you
and someone else I know...

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16 posted 2003-01-23 10:37 AM


Janet Marie - Thankyou for reading and commenting. My muse seems to drop in only when she wants to, and then "poof" she's gone. lol.

Karilea - thankyou for your sweet words. Hope is nothing without Faith....I believe.
hugs!!

passing - thankyou for the applause.

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17 posted 2003-01-23 12:52 PM


Chris, what a clever write! I love it! It's a piece of perfection!

Warm hugs and appreciative smiles,
Linda

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18 posted 2003-01-23 01:15 PM


Linda..hello!! Thankyou for reading and commenting. Where have you been girl?

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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19 posted 2003-01-23 05:07 PM


Chris, this is such beautiful thoughts written into beautiful words. I enjoyed...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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20 posted 2003-01-23 06:42 PM


Ethel - thankyou my friend!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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21 posted 2003-01-23 09:02 PM




Love the way you wrote this. So true about faith. Enjoyed this wise poem much.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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22 posted 2003-01-23 09:48 PM


Pat - so glad you enjoyed. Thanks!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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23 posted 2003-01-24 04:25 PM


Chris--Beautiful and lifting...much enjoyed!
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24 posted 2003-01-24 07:41 PM


Martie - thankyou dear poetess!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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25 posted 2003-01-24 08:02 PM


Wonderfully written Chris
                        Christine

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26 posted 2003-01-24 08:02 PM


Hi Christine!! Thankyou!!
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27 posted 2003-01-27 09:14 PM


nightshade, this poem has is so special. it is so nice to have faith
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28 posted 2003-01-27 09:24 PM


carol - thankyou. If I didn't have my faith..well...I might not be here right now. Glad you enjoyed.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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