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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2003-01-21 03:02 PM



Reborn

I feel like I am being reborn
My reality begins to change
Creating a brand new identity
But I’m the same old me
Not wanting to let go of the past
Yet wanting to fly forward
To the uncertain future
Teardrops fall filled with pain
As the door holding my
Beginning starts to open
Allowing hope and love to give
Me a comforting welcome


© Copyright 2003 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2003-01-21 06:38 PM


I know we are all hoping for your transition to be a smooth one and the days that follow to be happy ones, Tara.

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2 posted 2003-01-21 06:44 PM


Hi Tara!!  How's Dave?  Are you there yet??
I'm so happy for you, and it's great to see you posting...
Keep us updated.
~Hugs & Smiles to you both, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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3 posted 2003-01-21 11:17 PM




(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, I am so happy for you and Dave and hope you two meet real soon at last, yay, I'm the opposite right now as I feel empty again but this gives me hope I may find myself reborn sometime soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-21 11:49 PM



I hope things are going well for you. It is good to see you writing. Keep them coming, Lady. Enjoyed.

~~I Love You~~

Neeraja
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5 posted 2003-01-22 07:24 AM


I enjoyed the read and I wish you all the best!!!

Neeraja

Nan
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6 posted 2003-01-22 09:57 AM


Enjoy your rebirth - You deserve it richly...
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7 posted 2003-01-22 10:20 AM


rosepetals25
Well written, enjoyed the read.

Connel
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8 posted 2003-01-22 11:32 AM


Oh my god... This truly is a beatiful poem.

I tahnk you so much my friend, for sharing your lovly words with us.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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9 posted 2003-01-22 12:19 PM


I was really glad to hear about yours and Dave's life you are going to start together. I can understand the way your're feeling in this poem, though. I feel lots of the same feelings. I just haven't made that step yet to make the move to where my Love is.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

rosepetals25
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10 posted 2003-01-22 08:31 PM


Thank you all for responding I do appreciate your kind words and support.  As you know I haven't written anything in a long time. I personally didn't like it LOL but we are our worse critics lol.  

Again, I do appreciate your support!  Three days to go!!!!  Well, five days until I get to Houston.. three until I get on the bus LOL.  

Hugs,
Tara

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11 posted 2003-01-22 09:32 PM


Good luck to both you and Dave, Tara.  You're going to be SO happy!     Hugsss

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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12 posted 2003-03-20 04:14 PM


Very nice...James
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