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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-01-21 10:47 AM


~Veils~


I think of you often,
missing the soft moments
together when masks are off
and only a veil of silence
lays between us.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-01-21 11:27 AM


I remember
your dance of veils
slow enticement
as nakedthoughts
revealed


gemjop
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2 posted 2003-01-21 11:40 AM


knowing this well. silences are reflections of truth. and say so much. smiling at this. lovely write nakdthoughts.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-01-21 01:06 PM


I remember
your dance of veils
slow enticement
as nakedthoughts
revealed



Concealed,
those nakdthoughts
holding truth
for only you...



nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-01-21 06:36 PM


gemma, thank you for your lovely comments

M

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5 posted 2003-01-21 11:58 PM


exactly..
I LOVE this.
Its been a while, Lady.
I hope you're well.

~~I Love You~~

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2003-01-22 12:40 PM


I know it sounds cliche, but sometimes silence is golden in the sense that it is more real than any mask or veil that camouflages what might not have ever been there in the first place.

Not to say I misunderstood the pain of missing and the feelings that you wrote so well.

Hugs Maureen~


passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-22 03:58 AM


relating well
Nan
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8 posted 2003-01-22 08:37 AM


The simple verse can say more than the most elaborate... It's fitting here - and works well - Nicely said, M...
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-01-27 06:30 PM


Temptress, Hi there..nice to see you. Hope this New Year finds you well.
thank you *s
hugss

M

Lori, I know you understand, always
hugss

Dixie, I'd think you may be my long lost twin, but I have seen your pic... and you are younger
hugss
M

Nan, thank you again. Some days the only words that come to mind are "simple" ones.*s
M  


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-27-2003 06:31 PM).]

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