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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-01-21 10:43 AM


Broken window
Broken heart
For the glass that shattered
Was in my spirit
For what was mostly taken
Could be easily be replaced
Except the pictures
Taken of my brother

As the cancer tries
To end his life
My love gives him
The faith to survive
As the chemo
Makes him look
More like my dad

In the special warmth
We share here in Miami
Even in the unusual January chill
That will heat up the memories
To be remembered
Throughout all time

So in ghost pictures
Stored in stolen moments
Being raped of the opportunity
To take pictures back to Alabama
To share with others
Of the beauty here

In a Taurus parking lot
Of a Coconut Grove restaurant
So special are the people
That they open their place
To new talent in the area
But the cancer of the street
Soured that memory forever

So in the words of sadness
My trip here ended
In broken glass
But my love for my brother
Will never be shattered


Thought: In the miracle of Miami and its surrounding communities multi cultural diversity, lays the beauty to be creatively blessed in the wealth of its people.
Comment: The Taurus is a special place where uniquely creative people meet, usually in tranquility.

D.Lester Young 1/21/2003
Tuscaloosa, AL
Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry)

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (01-21-2003 10:45 AM).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-01-21 10:47 AM


ouch....

well written..and sad such things are real..


WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
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2 posted 2003-01-22 09:36 AM


Your words are so filled with sorrow. I will keep you in my thoughts and prayers.
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