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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-01-21 07:31 AM


Nirvana

I seek nirvana of my mind.
Or a soft savanna of kind
They all are one to my anon.
For thereare none I pass and shun.

I visit them a phantom spell.
For in a fantasy they dwell.
The roads to Eldora do reeks.
With the spirits of all who seek

Fragile is the footstep dare.
Etched in stone and worn of wear.
The rhyme of tick and time of wick
Heroic is the symbols brick.

But I will follow ebb and flow
Until my arrow leaves the bow
For when it does I’ll know the coup
My arrows pass will through to true.

I’ll wait upon my time and fate
I know for sure there is a date.

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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-21 07:43 AM


you always have such astoundinly well done rhyme.
And just as here, you say so much!
this is beautiful...
And yes, in time, all will happen.

Sometimes now is better though.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2003-01-21 07:45 AM


Fragile is the footstep dare.
Etched in stone and worn of wear.
The rhyme of tick and time of wick
Heroic is the symbols brick.


But I will follow ebb and flow
Until my arrow leaves the bow
For when it does I'll know the coup
My arrows pass will through to true.

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Fragile is the footstep dare.
Etched in stone and worn of wear.
The rhyme of tick and time of wick
Heroic is the symbols brick.

That verse..and its wisdom there in...is so poetically profound that it MUST be written in gold!!! Could one verse be any cooler???


Its insight like that, wrapped in your bows of rhymes divine that makes your poetry so special.

Very cool write me Wise man Winkie    




I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (01-21-2003 07:48 AM).]

Toerag
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3 posted 2003-01-21 07:47 AM


This really incredible Sy....
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4 posted 2003-01-21 08:05 AM




(sigh) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this is so very true and I believe you will follow this Middle Way and seek the inner-peace you so righteously deserve! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-21 08:43 AM


Toe,
I find you to be the incredible one I just read your poem for Marsha.

Noah,
I can only thank you my friend.

Alyssa,
Thank you my dear.

JM,
You are all the gold I seek and you offer it so freely. WWRS


Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-01-21 08:57 AM


This is an amazing write Sy!
Wonderful read with my morning tea!
YOU poet sir are a pleasure to wake up to!
~Morning hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-01-21 09:06 AM



Good morning, our dear Sy!
Thank you for this bye and bye...
left a bit of tear in eye...
you shouldn't really let me cry...

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8 posted 2003-01-21 09:10 AM


again Sy...your wisdom is offered to us with a style uniquely your own...and as always..I enjoyed.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-01-21 09:15 AM


Nancy,
And you are the pleasure of my labor.

Sunshine,
It is only a sun shower.

Cpat Hair
A pleasure to have you read me.

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10 posted 2003-01-21 09:41 AM


Seymour - oh, to be able to write like this, at anytime of day, nevermind so early in the morning!! I am in awe. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-01-21 04:13 PM


Chris,
Very sweet reply, thank you.

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