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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-01-21 06:35 AM



We say our goodbyes
in the quiet of our minds
for to say
would make real.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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GG
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1 posted 2003-01-21 07:25 AM


love this piece.
I love just looking into the eyes and seeing the words unsaid.

Especially needed when it hurts too much to hear it, as this was.
Enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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2 posted 2003-01-21 08:12 AM




(big hugggssssssss) It can hurt so much to say goodbye, I had to say a permanent goodbye to my Joanna this New Year and she didn't even say goodbye back! (wipes tears) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-01-21 09:13 AM


sometimes the words being spoken are too much... you captured that here and did it well.

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-01-21 09:16 AM




Gemma,

Very wise of you and like how you presented this. Enjoyed.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-01-21 09:17 AM


gemjop
This is a gem.

Rainbowdust
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6 posted 2003-01-23 10:18 PM


So true gem.. and something I can definitely relate to at this point in my life. A keeper for sure.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

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