How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Archives
 Open Poetry #24 Archive
 Let Me Be The One.........
 1 2 3 4 5 6
Follow us on Facebook

 This is an Archive. You may post a reply, but new topics are not allowed.

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Let Me Be The One.........

 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Sweetpoet16m4u04
Member
since 11-10-2002
Posts 160
Ma, U.S.A


0 posted 01-20-2003 07:46 PM       View Profile for Sweetpoet16m4u04   Email Sweetpoet16m4u04   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sweetpoet16m4u04


Let Me Be The One….

Let me be the one to hold you,
When tears fill your eyes.
Let me be the one to tell you the truth,
When you are surrounded by lies.

Let me be the one to miss you,
When we are apart.
Let me be the one to love you,
With all my heart.
Let me be the one to show you the true meaning of love,
To death causes us to become apart.

Let me be the one that shows you,
What it is that you do to me?
Let me be the one to bring you,
On a magic carpet ride over the graceful blue sea.
© Copyright 2003 Sweetpoet16m4u04 - All Rights Reserved
Miah
Senior Member
since 08-26-2002
Posts 1092
Pennsylvania


1 posted 01-20-2003 09:03 PM       View Profile for Miah   Email Miah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miah

This is a lovely write.  Love is something we not only want but something we want to give.  

[This message has been edited by Miah (01-20-2003 09:04 PM).]

GG
Member Elite
since 12-03-2002
Posts 3615
Lost in thought


2 posted 01-21-2003 07:43 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

made me sigh happy
'tis beautiful

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Rainbowdust
Member
since 12-05-2002
Posts 324
Sydney, Australia


3 posted 01-23-2003 10:38 PM       View Profile for Rainbowdust   Email Rainbowdust   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rainbowdust

Thanks for warming my heart on a day I truly needed it. Wonderful poem!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 11-16-1999
Posts 31622
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


4 posted 01-24-2003 02:01 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 08-26-99
Posts 46297
displaced


5 posted 01-24-2003 04:05 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

flows well, nice imagery...good write
kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 11-27-2003
Posts 991
nowhere special


6 posted 01-20-2004 11:03 PM       View Profile for kissa~rachelle   Email kissa~rachelle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kissa~rachelle


Let me be the one to bring you,
On a magic carpet ride over the deep blue  
sea!!

I loved your poem, especially these lines. Its like a fairy tale!(aladdin) I love it! hehe. Im not sure if i got the two lines totally right, i am not the greatest at remembering things! lol. Cant wait to see more!!!
~kissa~
 
 Post A Reply   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Archives >> Open Poetry #24 >> Let Me Be The One......... Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Create a Greeting Card with this Poem
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors