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vandana
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0 posted 2003-01-20 06:55 PM


Hope you would see me
Hope you would hear me
Singing through the nIght
If you only see me
In this every day
Every way
You will only see me
Standing here
With my heart
Opened for you
If you only see me cry
Would you come closer to me
And wipe my tears for me
If you only see laugh
You would see the way
And the things
I have done for you
If you only see me
Looking for your love
And being with you
If you only see me
Every day
Smiling upon a bright sun
If you only see
ME
LIke this....

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regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-20 07:00 PM





Vandana,

Sounds like a wistful kind of love to me. Hope you are seen and appreciated.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-01-20 07:00 PM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, I too hope he always sees you like this for you deserve to have that permanent smile on your face and true loves joy! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2003-01-20 08:28 PM


vandana - if he could see these words he will certainly see you...

BC

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