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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-01-20 06:19 PM

Your wearied touch.
Circles brushed
upon my lips.

These memories
are written by
your fingertips.

A ring of fire
now reflects
the growing dawn.

A bed of coals
in curling light,
rich and wan.

We grew slowly
as the sun
in morning motes.

Just as slowly,
years wear ash
in charcoal coats.

Holding close.
The embers dull.
In this embrace.

Against the sun
two shadows fall
like smoke and lace.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-01-20 06:25 PM

beautiful and sort of sad, all together...

"These memories
are written by
your fingertips"

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-01-21 12:02 PM

Again(still), you forge your words with clay-hammer strokes on dust and ash.

Quite a write

Ed

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2003-01-21 12:10 PM

memories written by fingertips...

sigh..that's great...you're good Mikey!!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-21 12:16 PM

I like the verse, too, that says...
.
.
"These memories
are written by
your fingertips"

This is just beautiful...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-01-21 12:38 PM

We grew slowly
as the sun
in morning motes.

Just as slowly,
years wear ash
in charcoal coats.

Holding close.
The embers dull.
In this embrace.

Against the sun
two shadows fall
like smoke and lace.
============================

your rhymes divine soothe me weary mothmind

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-01-21 05:33 AM

Stunning.

Reading this was like being finger fed peeled grapes. So sensual, so loving and so decadent.

oooooowow...

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-01-21 08:34 AM

you too seem to find the words and form them like a few others here so that what lies on the page..ends up in ones heart.

enjoyed mikey..

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-01-21 09:47 AM

Mikey!! This is a

Wonderful!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

9 posted 2003-01-21 11:48 AM

Thank you.

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

10 posted 2003-01-22 12:02 PM

**sighing heavily**
sorry..its all I can do.
I ADORE this, Mikey Guy.

~~I Love You~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-01-22 02:07 AM

*smiling*

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

12 posted 2003-01-22 07:22 AM

I enjoyed this poem!!!

Neeraja

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

13 posted 2003-01-22 11:43 AM

Much appreciation, everyone. Thank you.

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