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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2003-01-20 12:14 PM


It was inside
I felt it reach out
It touched I couldnt see
It was within without

I held it tight
I believe in it
it is truly what it is not
I taste, I touch, I smell

Perhaps tomorrow i'll be in it
within perhaps without
we will be/Are the same
But we will not until tomorrow.

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of  place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

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1 posted 2003-01-20 06:15 PM


"It was inside
I felt it reach out
It touched I couldnt see
It was within without"

not sure exactly what you mean, but I'm thinking it's love I liked this part here, best

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2 posted 2003-01-20 07:24 PM




(sigh) I too thought the same thing as Susan reading this, sounds like the heart of a lover, and I know with your deserving heart you will fall in it in no tie, as I was there but now am way out of it! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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