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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-01-20 10:06 AM



I slipped into the sheerness of you last night,
surprised by the reaction, as if you had never left,
creating the waves of remembrance
lifting me to that place where only
the mind and body can meet,
allowing the past to flow freely
and touch me once more.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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gemjop
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1 posted 2003-01-20 10:26 AM


Hey lady! ahhhh memories. they hurt, because the emotions arte still raw, but arent they great.they sometimes have the ability to bring us back to life. you described this very well, muchly enjoyed!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2003-01-20 10:41 AM


My memories no longer hurt, they are just a place I go to when I am feeling too alone.
thanks
M

Denise
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3 posted 2003-01-20 11:47 AM


So beautifully expressed, Maureen! Memories can provide such great comfort, can't they?
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2003-01-20 02:24 PM


Sometimes all you have are the memories...both good and bad.
Thank you Denise

M

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-21 09:45 AM


ah slipping into the things we knew...and finding comfort though it be smpty of warmth..it still touches us and beats no touch at all..
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-01-21 01:11 PM


I am good at making my memories seem real now...and so I can  enjoy my days or nights when the mood entices...
thank you C

M

bsquirrel
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7 posted 2003-01-21 01:37 PM


Beautiful.
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-01-21 06:18 PM


You really think so Mike? Thanks

M

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
9 posted 2003-01-21 09:46 PM


This is so beautiful, Maureen.
Connel
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10 posted 2003-01-21 09:59 PM


Enjoyed.. tis beatiful.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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