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Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

0 posted 2003-01-19 11:46 PM

Realistically
I expected nothing
funny.....
that’s exactly
what you gave
leaving me
only one choice
and how strange is it
that the comfort I thought
was you
turned out to be
my own shadow.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-01-20 02:56 AM

hindsight is 20/20 indeed...good write

Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

2 posted 2003-01-20 10:31 AM

thank you

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-01-20 10:52 AM

keep building on your own strength. very much liked the independance and realisation in this poem. exellent write!
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2003-01-20 03:09 PM

ah, now to this I can relate...

like it, like the pic

K

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-20 03:28 PM

Wonderful!
Very well done!
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

winston
Member

since 2002-12-19

Posts 204
NW of Eden

6 posted 2003-01-20 06:14 PM

Short but sharp. Like the twist at the end. Thanks.

It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency.
--G. "DUBYA" BUSH. June 14, 2001. Unaware of rolling TV camera.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-01-20 07:50 PM

wonderful writing

*s
M

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2003-01-21 03:41 PM

This so often seems to be the case, doesn't it? Nice writing, by the way.

Welcome to Passions.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

9 posted 2003-01-21 04:04 PM

Nice

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