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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-01-19 10:16 PM

Take one Curl

Take one last curl of mine
Oh love,
Take one last curl of mine

Take heart in all we held
My dear
Take heart in its entwine

Bid me well on my adieu
Bid fond
Fare well, my dear

Say goodbye to our
Sweet love, my dear,
Take one last curl of mine.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-01-19 10:22 PM

Ah...this is so tender and sad Karilea.
Lovely images in this write.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Jaime

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2 posted 2003-01-19 11:24 PM

Tender comes to my mind as well.. very sincere.. the thoughts and emotions that come with time and experience, yet combining with the sentiment and unfearing intimacy of a child.. "take one curl"

- Jaime

Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe.

Souls Shadow
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since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

3 posted 2003-01-19 11:32 PM

'curl' could be so many things... and in that, so many could relate. like how you did that.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-19 11:45 PM

Karilea, for some reason this one made me think of a song to a little Irish jig....I love those. I could almost see the Lads and Lasses dancing sround...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-01-20 02:55 AM

loved this one, brought back memories

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

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Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 2003-01-20 09:07 AM

Oh, so sad dear friend

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-01-20 09:12 AM

Sunshine,
This is a keeper. When you're on you're on.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

8 posted 2003-01-20 11:11 AM

very emotion-filled, a tender plea

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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9 posted 2003-01-20 12:07 PM

Very sad, Karilea. This reminded me of saying goodbye to a loved one at their funeral.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

10 posted 2003-01-20 12:39 PM

Karilea--I can see this coming to you on yellowed paper, from some time long ago when a curl of hair would be treasured in jewelry. Lovely, yet sad with some kind of parting.

zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

11 posted 2003-01-20 01:12 PM

Sad but sweet, all in one
enjoyed reading this

Hugs, zenny

The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

*hugs* Kelly.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2003-01-20 01:35 PM

Surrendering sadness in this write...a love not lost..just left...a curl...a souvenir..

believe in what your heart feels...

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