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The Dance
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The Dance |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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The Dance They laid hay down ‘cross yard still fresh fiddler played on, as hay was threshed; and feet? They played long day-dreams time, I called you “love”, you called me, “mine”. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-19-2003 09:47 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a sweet memory, Karilea....   God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh I love this! Sounds like an old fashioned hoe-down! Thank you ma'am!! ~hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
awww this just brought a big smile and happy sigh to me. Its good to know these things don't happen only in dremas  Much enjoyed! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
just though of the strands of hay getting between my toes..hehe  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It made me think of a hayride..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and beautiful... I love it |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i hear the bluegrass music of kentucky playing in the background, interesting, and romantic poem |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You must be a real country girl at heart. It's nice how we remember the fun times. I enjoyed reading this Liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Another song from the sunshine, warm and inviting! |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Warm poem, lovely end Hugs, zenny The greatest thing u'll ever learn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I just said, "Yehaw!", then of course I had to laugh myself off this chair, but came back to say the beautiful image this did put in my mind at first before I got silly. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Do you know that I'm a fiddler? This is a beautiful scene. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Thank you for the sunshine Sunshine.  A pleasure to read. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I can smell the fresh-cut hay, hear the music and see the dance.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - love your dance, sure do... BC |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
In so few words, you painted a wonderful picture. Enjoyed! [This message has been edited by Miah (01-20-2003 09:09 PM).] |
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