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Luminescence |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Luminescence today I rubbed my wrist together trying to remember the essence of my scent "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
enoyed.. but this leaves me lonely. As if I'd stayed too long off in a dream and forgot where I was going. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Jaime
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Would it be far too insincere sounding if I simply said that I loved this? It just fits my mood right now (and many other nows). This is my favourite kind of poem. Short and to the point.. yet it lingers on you long after you're finished. - Jaime Shiva went on break now look at how much it's gonna take to make this place a space where we can breathe. [This message has been edited by Jaime (01-19-2003 11:20 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I did that too *sigh* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmmmm.... I would think the essence one hard to forget... ery nicely done..concise and as usual distilled to the essential elements as served subtly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Distilled into lovelyness. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 I liked this...brings soft thoughts to mindM |
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