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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-01-19 04:14 PM



Close

my hand
still
holds yours
a flower’s bloom
in fade
dried scattered
velvet petals
a heart
at times
just has
to wade
I wish
to escape it
crush
the leaves
of this
rose
but
my heart
won’t let
my hand

close

"It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly."


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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-01-19 06:18 PM


Lovely Helen..perfectly lovely.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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2 posted 2003-01-19 07:16 PM




(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I can understand this frustration and let your palm remain outstretched so it can feel the rain, God Bless You, we all love you nso much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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