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When did you give up
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When did you give up |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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When did you stop caring When was it that you gave up It’s never been like this before You say things like you mean them But you never make sense It’s never been like this before You’re so angry and so loud When was it that you gave in It’s never been like this before It’s like you were never you before Everything’s different But I don’t understand Because nothing’s changed. small insignificant useless me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
strange, isn't it? |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
so confusing, and so hurtful. made me sigh in a twinge of pain. Enjoyed though Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Have to agree with GG...almost painful to read. You expressed your feelings so powerfully here. Hope things get better for you. The day you were born, you were born free |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Rosie, my heart goes lout to you, sweet friend, I can understand this sad feeling as my Joanna has changed and I have lost her and it saddens me how everything they used to believe becomes hypocritical or mismatched! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs out ton you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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