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dhicks03
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0 posted 2003-01-19 12:44 PM



I have thought of you each second
Moreover, when I have slept, I’ve held you close in my dreams
God only knows how much I miss you
God’s the only one that knows at all it seems

Very few things bring relief
For me a tortured soul,
Emptiness inside is as if someone died
Well, guess you’ll never know

Nevertheless, for what it’s worth
I just wanted you to know
Always and forever…
I Love You

Copyright © -2001 Dennis Hicks
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© Copyright 2003 Dennis Hicks - All Rights Reserved
regards2you
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1 posted 2003-01-19 03:36 AM




It is so important to acknowledge such in writing, in our hearts, our minds, our souls. And then, there is a letting go. There is...

And in this poem is a sincerely and purity which speak to my heart.


Enjoyed.

God bless, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-19 04:24 AM


aw...this is so beautiful! but sad too
GG
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3 posted 2003-01-19 10:24 PM


ouch, I feel empty and awkward now.
Like someone knew me too well and left with a piece of me.
But this is beauitful.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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4 posted 2003-01-19 11:06 PM


Dennis, this is beautiful. Many emotions and filled with longing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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