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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-01-19 12:29 PM


Sifts light, to flurry and to white
Another dress becomes the ball at night
In sweet serene, a quiet clean
Of wonderland to bed the winter of a dream

Glass walls, in singular a vision calls
A sweep all sense intuitive of hallowed halls
In crackling fire, untamed desire
Of home to build in bail and wire

By patio, to propagate with summer show
Another pass beyond the glass in warmer glow
In kitchen style to please by smile
Of simple tastes equip to nourish all in style

Sifts light, by feel and some by sight
Another touch upon the point illumined bright
In sweet and spice the calm times thrice
Of inner fields upon the walls in settings nice

Copyright Kkh 1/18/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (01-19-2003 12:42 AM).]

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dhicks03
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1 posted 2003-01-19 01:02 AM


Very good write, enjoyed!!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-01-19 03:58 AM


good rhyme scheme! loved it!
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3 posted 2003-01-19 04:28 AM




(sigh) Oh Kathleen, this is very beautiful, sweet friend, pixie dust enshrouds the roos in your imagination always to us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-19 07:50 AM


TD, this was a lovely dusting of imagery,
and the various realms you visit with your
imagination...

Enjoyed it so much!  Thank you!

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2003-01-19 08:03 AM


i feel like im in a snowglobe whirling around; light and airy; loved these poems of yours
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6 posted 2003-01-19 08:07 AM


ThisDiamond
Reads like you were brewing up a love potion, enjoyed.

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