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Souls Shadow
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since 2003-01-17
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0 posted 2003-01-19 12:01 PM



The words.....


I wished for them
so many times
wanted
to hear you
in earnest whisper

throaty

sexy

with need

I wanted them
to touch....
to reach
depths
that went beyond
merely romantic
and put devastating
to shame
......and in your silence
your utter stillness of sound
I’ve heard so much more
than any words
you
could ever
say

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2003-01-19 12:17 PM


to reach
depths
that went beyond
merely romantic
and put devastating
to shame

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oooh...that is aching with sensual angst..
very cool write and pic...
welcome to Poetry Land Souls Shadow.. so nice to have you here with us.

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2003-01-19 12:33 PM


Speaking volumes.
Well done. Welcome to Passions.  Look forward to reading you. ThisDiamond

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-01-19 01:30 AM


This is absolutely fantastic, and to add a Dali artwork, you've earned a huge fan
GG
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Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-01-19 02:55 AM


oh my! wow, felt this one, deep.
Amazing write!
Welcome to the Blue Pages, certainly glad you came. Stay awhile!
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-01-19 02:58 AM


Welcome To Passions In Poetry.
I enjoyed your poem and hope to read much
more of your poetry...

~Ethel...garysgirl~

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-01-19 04:14 AM




(big hugggsssssssss) This is such a sad but powerful debut, sweet friend, I wish that all that could be said could actually be recited without preterite defuncts, you nail it on the dot here, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2003-01-19 04:22 AM


WOW! You will fit in very well! Welcome to Passions! I love what you've done here! More, more, more!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2003-01-19 05:30 AM



Souls Shadow with Stillness of Sound...even the introduction of you and your poem is poetic.  Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your e-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-01-19 09:17 AM



Oh what a wonderful opening post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Souls Shadow
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since 2003-01-17
Posts 29

10 posted 2003-01-19 11:26 AM


Janet, thank you for the great welcome
This Diamond, thank you
Aenimal,that's excellent. I have enjoyed your poetry too
GG, thanks for the amazing and the welcome
Ethel, thank you
Noah, wow...thank you
Passing Shadows, thank you
Sunshine, very cool, thank you
Enchantress, neat welcome, thank you

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
11 posted 2003-03-06 03:11 PM


A very belated welcome.

A Dali fan, no less.

You do write well

~wranx

Lone Ranger
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 92
Salvador , Bahia , Brazil
12 posted 2003-03-07 03:46 PM


Loved the way you wrote this poem...

"Doubt thou the stars are fire
Doubt that the sun doth move
Doubt truth to be liar
But never doubt I love you"
(Shakespeare)

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