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Open Poetry #24
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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2003-01-18 09:28 PM


Sell me something
Sex
Power
Youth

It’s easy to walk
Oblivious
At least for some
To the guy
Covered
In indoor outdoor
Bags of discard
Huddled

Sell me!
Your voice
is louder than mine
hawking naked breast
or a moment
of Monet
telling me I am appealing
not
middle age ugly

go ahead


sell me

but remember
I don’t buy
Trash
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Kethry
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Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-01-18 09:42 PM

Cpat,
extraordinary observation of life - and pride.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-01-18 09:47 PM

...WOW!!...
Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-01-18 09:52 PM

I found this to be very interesting.....a different point of view....


I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455
4 posted 2003-01-18 10:06 PM

Sell me!
Your voice
is louder than mine
hawking naked breast
or a moment
of Monet
telling me I am appealing
not
middle age ugly

go ahead


sell me

.........


I'll buy the next round...

[This message has been edited by Duncan (01-18-2003 10:08 PM).]
Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-01-18 10:10 PM

show up in New Orleans..and I'll buy... I could use a good talk.
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554
6 posted 2003-01-18 11:16 PM

can I interest you in some raspberry tea...I'll give ya a good deal

If I was there...I'd moth talk your ear off *lol*..youd need a good stiff drink as much as I yap yap

I was reborn on the shores of the Chesapeake Bay
Virginia hasn't yet faded away
I keep thinking tomorrow is coming today
So I am endlessly waiting
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
7 posted 2003-01-18 11:44 PM

Bourban St. is really not much fun...and geez, I could use some conversation and a few thousand drinks m'self...

sigh.

and yes, you captured the ugly of it quite well...I told ya--head UPTOWN.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-01-19 01:03 AM

raw power loved this cpat,
garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-01-19 03:03 AM

I loved it too, Capt. Ron...
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-01-19 03:59 AM

ah, remembering...what a place!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
11 posted 2003-01-19 05:45 AM


Say Hello to Faulkner's ghost,
and bring back
one truffle
for me.  
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