Open Poetry #24 |
- I Don't Know Why (songish) |
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Caught in dreams I’m lost it seems. I can’t hear my own shout Anymore But You hear my cries As I close my eyes My knees are planted firmly On the floor. I don’t know why, But You say You love me Yeah, I know You love me. And I shed some tears While thinking of the years. Confused; but I’m always In Your hands. I think I’m alone, While I search and roam I seem to focus on all the Foreign lands. But I know I’m safe… And I don’t know why, But you say you love me, Yeah I know you love me. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a lovely song! I don't know why He loves us either, Alyssa, but I'm sure glad that He does! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
GG, Beautifully done, with a charming refrain. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, Liked this as your others. But, are you speaking of two separate enitites? You did not capitalize the last two 'yous'....Hmmmmmmmmm? Smiling... Enjoyed, Hugs to you, Pat I'll be out awhile, so may not get back to you tonight if you answer.... catcha later, tho. ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
thank you each for your replies! And Pat, whoooops ..Word doesn't like my capitalised You's, I must have mistaked it. But it IS supposed to be! Ah and my turn in the game, I really don't like murder mysteries... but ah, playing anyway, better hurry! Glad you enjoyed! God's blessings to you, and hugs Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (01-19-2003 03:50 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat one! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
thank you Always appreciate your replies Dixie Always, Alyssa Did I mention sleep at night is good! :P - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (01-19-2003 04:52 AM).] |
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Souls Shadow Junior Member
since 2003-01-17
Posts 29 |
wondered if this was going to be patterned after Norah Jones', 'Don't know why' song, but it wasn't. This was good |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Don't know that song! But glad you enjoyed this thanks for the reply. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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