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rOxXbabY391
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0 posted 2003-01-18 02:42 PM


Not sure what to think now
Not sure how to feel
Don't know what you're thinking
If you love me still
I don't know what to do now
Do I run or should I stay?
Do I fight for you of sit and wait
Or don't go either way
My options are very simple
But it's all so complicated
I can't see how you feel towards me
And it gets me so frustrated
Are you down for her, or still for me?
Or are you just so blind that you can't see:
how much I've liked you and for how long
That I just can't see
--what all went wrong


"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-01-18 03:00 PM


hope the confusion clears up...
it can be so awkward... but in time...in time, things are leveled.
Enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
2 posted 2003-01-18 04:08 PM


Enjoyable post.
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-01-19 05:01 AM


it's all confusing to me...good write, very expressive
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