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Open Poetry #24
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iMMuNe
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 49
Maine, USA
0 posted 2003-01-18 09:33 AM

A hand lifts down to pick me up
As I try to find the hand,
I look up.

As I look up the sun glares down,
Suddenly the person takes away my frown,
Glorious as always I look upon her face,
Heart already pounding, it started to race.

For she was Sarah,
Her I knew,
Surely either her or I,
Did not know what to do.

As the wind bristles,
Her bangs revealed her gorgeous face.

Suddenly I woke up,
From this mysterious place,
Than I asked myself,
How true could it be?

For than I knew,
That she was the love,
For me.
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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-01-18 09:53 AM

A nice way to be lifted up off the cold ground.
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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2 posted 2003-01-18 11:39 AM



Dreams can be so revealing. Good for you and for Sarah.


Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-01-19 05:25 AM

Love this...James
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