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Dreaded Shadows
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Dreaded Shadows |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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lightening rips the sky apart, thunder gives voice to long sought after truths, revelations come in flashing illuminations, as i enter the seamingless gateless gate in anticipation of grasping at some thing, longing to stop the moment, snap the picture, too soon it all eludes me again, teased ,never satisfied, i'm left hungry, always, coming and going in circles, i weave my own webs, beginnings and endings over and over and nothing sticks, most days, but these dreaded shadows |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
xray shadows? perhaps just spots that show how many times your soul has been touched, and you have given up a part of your heart? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michele, This is a wonderful poem and you have captured exactly my 'growing process' and how elusive the little gems of wisdom are. The flash of insight gone before I can even remember it or mull it over and fit it into 'me'.... Just outside the realm of understanding, yet so close I can sense it but not 'get it'. I like this poem a great deal. Thanks, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oh i know this feeling to damn well. That fleeting glimpse like a carrot dangling always just out of reach. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It's like haunting yourself, isn't it? sigh. Hugs. |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
O Brooklyn beauty Who lives not far from me If you don't mind me Saying, there's no e In "lightning"  "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - have seen those dreaded shadows also... BC |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes, i do haunt myself, serene one, winston, lightning, i stand corrected, but you get a point for the compliment, im a sucker for sweettalk |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
scary, like echoes of a future come back to makes sure you have one. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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