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rm711
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0 posted 2003-01-17 05:59 PM



Music
That’s what it does to me
I’m sitting in the corner of a room
Staring at a wall
That’s all it is to you
But to me…

I’m flying
I’m crying
I’m singing
I’m dancing
This is my world
And all it takes
Is the beat

Around me the world goes on
Pain Hurt Grief
But right here
All I see is me
Happy as I could possibly be…

I’m running
I’m laughing
I’m screaming
I’m smiling
This is my world
And all it takes
Is the beat

You walk past
Totally oblivious
To what is going on
Right in front of you
I’m living…

I’m climbing
I’m falling
I’m reaching
I’m building
This is my world
And all it takes
Is the beat

Nothing else matters
Because here
You get all the time to yourself
And you can bring
With you whoever you think
Deserves to share
This heaven with you
Because now…

You’re crying
You’re living
You’re laughing
You’re smiling
Right here with me.

small insignificant useless me

© Copyright 2003 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Souls Shadow
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since 2003-01-17
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1 posted 2003-01-17 06:18 PM


it always amazes me, the places I can go, when the music plays. enjoyed this
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2 posted 2003-01-17 08:07 PM



...and the beat goes on...

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3 posted 2003-01-17 08:55 PM




(sigh) Oh Rosie, this is so very touching and melodic, sweet friend, I love all kinds of music all across the world and love writing my own kind, as I have the grace of Shakira, the wisdom of Bob Dylan, the liberty of Bob Marley, and the tears of Counting Crows, etc. all deep inside me! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, rock on, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rosie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light alwaysn shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-01-18 03:04 AM


very good, I like this!
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