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bsquirrel
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0 posted 2003-01-17 04:42 PM


The waiting
began.

And continued.

Outgrew
its ends.

Ideas
of what
the outcome might be

tempered with patience,
buried
by zeal.

Was he tidying
plaints?
Weighing his worth?

Sharing his insights
for seven days.

Saturday's threshold
end-of week
wisdom.

Anticipation
revealed no vice.

From a fan  

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (01-17-2003 04:53 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-01-17 05:00 PM



Ditto, Mikey.
I'm a lady-in-waiting!

bsquirrel
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2 posted 2003-01-17 05:03 PM


Psst, Kacy, check "Insights" under Mature Content for number 6.
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-01-17 05:14 PM


thanx to wranx, I need a shower

Thanks for the linking, Mikey.

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4 posted 2003-01-18 01:01 AM


Mikey,
Thanks, squirrel dude....
For this, the support, and the encouragement.

Your own insights into these poor scribbles, honor me.

To Kacy, witch, brian, Duncan and some new friends...thanks again for putting up with this.......introspection.

I'm grateful for you all.

Ed

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5 posted 2003-01-27 01:20 PM


Thank *you*, Ed.
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