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Open Poetry #24

wine o'clock

kram
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 20
texas

0 posted 2003-01-17 03:21 PM

Wine O'clock
when your day winds down
the highway
and turns onto the dirt road
that meanders through the vineyard...
slipping into evening dusk

As the road narrows
and the vines become higher
noon searchs but cannot find you.
Six AM waits patiently
for you to reach the other end
when, after sleeping among the purple grapes,
you'll plunge unwillingly into the morning.

All at once
you're back on the highway
awakened by those alarm clock grooves
they put beside the road...
longing for wine o'clock

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-17 05:23 PM

Excellent imagery, like the feel of the
words and images...goes well together..

Welcome to Passions, look forward to your
poetry..

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-17 08:10 PM

Sounds of a very lonesome soul
with only the thought of
one refuge...

tugging...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-01-18 03:05 AM

wow! do i know this feeling?

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